My NEW iphone!!

Corbin wrote a fantastic piece of writing. Both his teachers are very proud of him. He paragraph independently (his goal). Please let him know what you like about this writing.

The other day I asked mum what needs doing. She said hmmm and went over to my step dad and she was talking to him. I could not hear what they were saying.

Then all of a sudden they both turned around and my stepdad said, “here have a play with this.” The thing was a iphone 4!

The iphone was my step dads mums old iphone. I got it because she got a new one and everyone had a phone but me.

I was hugely excited.

When I got the iphone it was already set up with my email and messages. It made my day.