The forest adventurer

 Corbin N

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One day a kid could tim went for a walk in the forest .He’s mum could out he did not go back to his mum. his mum started worry.

“ Where is he ‘’she said.

She could hear a noise coming from the forest then all the birds flow out .

Tim was all alown in the forest.It started geting dark.So he started macking a tent out of fern and vine.

“I am lost ‘’said tim.

Oh no it is starting to rain what am I going to do I am getting wet .Oh now the wind has started I think a storm is coming.He went to bed without any dinner and he said to himself

“I will get up tomorrow and see what is happening’’ so he fell asleep.

He woke up the next day wow it is so so sunny he could not believe it.

I am hungry oh look there is a deer he snecked over stab he got the deer I will go and get a camp fire going now that's going I will go and chop up the deer. I chopped up the deer now I can cook it up .The deer should be done.

He starts eating the deer yum that is good I am full now I am going to go for a walk.

Wow look there is some parrots in the tree oh there is another deer and a big grizzly bear, There is a wild peacock and a peahen with baby’s.Oh my house it is up there . I am so excited I knock on the door. mum I missed you.

“Where were you “said mum .

“Oh i got lost in the forest”.

I sore baby peacocks and peahens,a grizzly bear,a deer,and a parrot.

sugars lamb

My pet sheep sugar had a baby lamb the lamb was a girl.

The lamb was born not alive.

sugars mum was lizzie and when sugar and spice were born lizzie died so then we had to bottle feed them in then one night they got sick and sugar was the sick one and spice was walking around then spice died so now we have sugar.

So the next day My step dad's mum found it dead in the paddock. She was looking after all of the animals because I was at my dad's and my mum was in japan.

The dad of the lamb was our pet sheep called Rambo .And we got Rambo from kyle because Rambos mum would not let him get any milk so we bottle fed him.

It was very bad that the lamb died because we keep the girl lambs and now sugar has lots of milk.