Thursday 24 November 2016

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This week I have been working on my boom writer story. Boom writer is a writing site for schools and classes to use.



“Well I think we should have ethan in our team” Connor Insists “Have you seen him play he plays games 24/7”

“Ok lets ring him up” said jack “And tell him that we need to train”

“Ring ring” Ethan’s the phone goes off

“Hi Ethan its Connor” Connor Says “We decided that you are in our team for gaming, are you up for it?”

“Oh yeah!” said Ethan “Ok, great do you want to come to my house to practice with Jack and Me?”

“Sure, if it’s Ok with your Mum” Ethan says

“Yeah, it is, see you in 20 min’s” Connor says

“Ok, I will be then soon” Ethan replies

Knock knock

“Hello, let’s go practice”
Jack and Ethan walk all the way to the “Man Cave” So they could practice there gaming.

“Hay Connor, what games are we going to play?” Ethan asks. Um let's practise Team Fortress Two.

“Ok i’m not that good so hopefully this will help me play better”

4 Hours later

Jack said to his Mum “Can you please take us to the game fest” Jack beg’s “It’s just Connor, Ethan and me”

Jack’s Mum said “NO!” so the boy’s thought let’s sneak out to the game fest with ethan’s mum, we can’t tell anyone.

The next day the boy’s jumped in Ethan’s Mum’s car and said “Let’s go to the game fest” So the boy’s toke of to the game fest


When the boy’s got to the game fest the boy’s saw the School bullies...

1 comment:

  1. Hi Corbin
    I did enjoy reading your chapter 2 of Boom Writer. Well done for getting the most votes. I will be looking forward to reading the final chapters that everyone submits!

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